Eva-01

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Daecu, Feb 11, 2009.

  1. Daecu

    Daecu Senior Member

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    <div align="center">Thanks to Huy-N for the beautiful vector

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    DRM Senior Member

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    great tag, you beat me to it though, just got this vector and was about to make a tag something similar to this
     
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    lol sorry bro ^_^;; thanks for the comment :)
     
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    all in all i'd say i like the second image better,even tough there are alot of things that it is missing which the first one has. in this picture i've marked all the things i like and dislike in green(like) and red(dislike).
    by dislike i mean that only in comparison to the other picture,i'd say overall both tags are very well made.

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    1:very minor detail,but i think it looks better if u take this out of the picture as in the second one,since i personally believe it distracts from the "main parts" of the vector.

    2: I like the way this blends the vector in very much. to me it feels as if something is missing at this position in the second picture.

    3: Can't really tell why I like this,but this just looks better than the "empty" space in the second picture.

    4: Also a minor detail,like the first thing I said.

    5: Here it looks like you wanted to take it out of the picture,but left it in half the way. I personally dislike this kind of half-assed removals.Ignore this if u want since it's just my personal oppinion.

    6: Seems to sharp,the second picture looks way better there.

    7: This small green thing fills some empty space in a good way. thats always a good thing :)

    8: Once again,seems to sharp.

    9: This "half-seethrough" part just messes me up, I really really hate it.anyway it's just a personal oppinion so feel free to ignore this if you want.

    10: Here the generally sharper picture number one is a bit blurrier than the second picture. I like that because it feels abit smoother.

    11: Fills empty space,in a good way.

    12: A bit blurry. I prefer to have sharpened fonts. Personal oppinion i guess so feel free to ignore.

    13: Seems very empty,since the black tone doesnt change at all,I also dislike that part in the first picture,but it's a bit better there.

    14: A bit too bright.

    15: Seems too sharp.

    16: Too bright once again.



    Hope this helps in any way and sorry for altering your pictures . Naturally i won't use this anywhere else but in this post.
     
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    that is one hella crit, beautiful work on the crit alone lol
     
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    thanks i tried my best <3
     
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    Wow Btray, thanks for all that @_@ I'll definitely take another look here when I get back from class and probably change some things, I appreciate all the time you put into it :)

    I wouldn't suggest doing it 100% of the time though, you'll drive yourself nuts ^_^ thanks again :)
     
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    wow awesome critic

    anyway not much to say after that but kiu
     
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    Pretty mean tag. I think you just mighta over-done it a bit on the Sharpening.
     
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    I won't don't worry, it's just that i'm kinda sick atm so i've got alot of time at hands and i felt it somewhere deep inside myself that this work couldnt be criticized any shorter.
    normally i might not have bothered posting because it'd have take me that long but anyway.
     
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    Thanks but please don't hijack my thread for flaming etc.

    I'm kinda a moderator and such and don't tend to take a liking to those sorts of things. :)

    Thanks for the comments though ^_^ Please keep them to c&c on my post though, not on btray's c&c.
     
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    I like the concept and the sig, but the bottom one is a bit oversharpened, and I dislike the blur you have on the purple squiggly on the first one. So if you like took the second signature's sharpen down a notch, it would be awesome :eek: .
     
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    Thanks m8, I know what you mean ^_^
     
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    Besides what I said above: great depth; it progressively and noticeably gets closer from left to right. Good lighting; but I don't think that's your fault because you worked off a sweet render. I think that your custom shapes look a little out of place but you can fix that if you introduce some of the highlight and shadow colors into them. As for the second version, you don't need a c4d because you're mint without it and it takes away from the lighting that I like.

    mint is fresh

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