It looks good. The background is nice, and the blending is too. There's no focul though. It would look a lot better with some sharpening and blurring. ^_^
well more theres no strong focal. because the focal now doesn't draw the eye as much as it should. and what id do with this tag is just blur the background a little more for better depth, there's not enough right now.
^^^^ Thanks for correcting me. There is a focul it's just not very pronounced. I'd like to see a version II.