The smudging on the border make's this tag look really bad The smudging outside of the tag on the right side look's bad as well.
I like the left side of it. But you need to bring out the focal a little bit more. I would just get rid of the border.
It's good but the focal needs to be brought out a lot more, and the smudging on the right just doesn't seem like it belongs there. I don't really have too big a problem with the border though and the text looks good. My rating: 8.5/10