looks really nice man, text is kinda iffy, but its not that bad. if anythign i'd just suggest shrinking the hight of the top line a bit. your light source is also really bright, so maybe if you made the shading on edward stand out a little more (darken the render a tad) it may look a little more defined. other than that the effects are nice, bg isnt really boring and render is incorporated well, gj ^_^
i think if you toned the colors down a bit and added a bit more flow it would be awesome but it does look really good