Edge Of The Universe

Discussion in 'Large Artwork' started by Sh00tevery1, Apr 13, 2009.

  1. Sh00tevery1

    Sh00tevery1 Well-Known Member

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    Well here is my newest piece of art. What do you think? Overall there are loads of improvments and I am still getting to.


    Things on the list to fix.

    -Make Planets less similar
    -Put large asteroid in foreground this creating larger scale of depth

    Anything else?


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  2. Broken

    Broken Well-Known Member

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    The ring's are HUGE, needlessly so. And the bit of the ring extending to the Top-right of the piece is far bigger than the bit obscured by the closest planet.
    It's not a bad attempt generally though, the text is pointless, and the border's a bit annoying.

    Asteroids look good except the placement's a tad too random, needs to be a bit more linear and lighting could generally use work.

    Better than the attempts of most though, and a good effort so. (Y)
     
  3. .Illuzion

    .Illuzion Well-Known Member

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    great attempt here as said the rings are huge and the text is pointless may I also point out th way the closest planet is the one that is on the bottom edge of the paper... the shape is off it should disappear off the page with a tad bit of a curve in the planet.
     
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    A typical picture that makes me reallize how small I actually am ;)

    I find the placing of the astriods and plannets very natural, except for the big ring around the second plannet.
    Because the ring is larger in the top right corner.
     

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