I like how it turned out but comments and rate please. I wasnt sure what to do with the text tips please.
K dude. I'm gonna be rough, k? Cause that's what's going to help you get better. It doesn't look very good. It's lacking depth, flow, and blending. So pretty much everything. lol The effects aren't that great either. :\ But, you CAN get better! Check out the tut section here: http://www.gamerenders.com/forum/index.php?showforum=8 Those will help out a bunch. ^_^ Let's see some more man.