Dr_twist Vs lovehurts

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dr_twist


lovehurts

 

gl

 

Lovehurts gmv.....better depth/lighting

 

bump .

 

HMm tough decision but I will go with Dr. Twist...Lovehurts kinda just looks like a bunch of dots under a render.

 

rofl, b&w version but w/e
1-1

 

Not sure what saying b.w version has anything to do with it looking like dots...what does that mean so I know haha?

 

dr_twist

I like the color scheme used here but I really think that the blending could've been better with the render. I mean it looks awkwardly placed there. But the background is very nice and it compliments the picture. The only real solid complaint I have would be the text. Without some indication of what you're trying to convey here it's really just flat and has no depth. Right now it's eye candy and all it represents to me is a good render ontop of a good background. Maybe you just wanted it to look good but still play around with emotions you're trying to convey and play around with different texts.

lovehurts

Okay I really like the mood the setting the "Drift into the Stars" that's very nice you conveyed something in your signature and you did it well. However the text is hard to read so maybe make "the" a different color or make it apart from the line of words because when I first gave it a brief glance I just didn't feel like reading that long line of letters that had no breaks in between. But after analyzing your signature and looking at the text it makes sense. I really dislike the blurriness of the starts it really takes a lot out of your sig and if they had been sharper they might have actually looked like stars and not just blurred blobs of white. You have depth you have concept but you lack the means of achieving it. I think this could have been an excellent signature if you had sharpened the stars and contrasted the render more so it'd stand out. The lighting was a nice idea but it just made the picture look bland and just faded and it was kind of unappealing when you did that.

I like lovehurts signature it just lacks that extra bit to make it a exceptional signature. But going with the technical terms I think that all in all dr_twist has it better put together. It's really nothing personal but lovehurts I really feel like if you tweaked it a little bit and made it stand out more, the design elements coupled with your message would have hands down won you this battle. But dr_twist does have the better signature. SO DR_TWIST gmv.

I know that maybe you're like "who does this person think she is..." but I really hope you both take the advice I tried to give, and if you think I'm way out of my league that's fine. But I think you both have a lot of talent and if you keep working at this you both can become much better.

 

2-1 twist
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lovehurts gmv, nice flow and original colors overall great sig

 

dr_twist gmv, dont like to much dots. Seriously even if its b&w version, you just got dots and renders. nothing really going on much there.

 

Dr_twist GMV,
not really feeling either, but lovehurts just looks to me like the pic was slapped on.

 

2-4 come on guys lets go!

 

Lovehurts gmv
better depth & lighting

 

dr twist gmv...