Divine Inspiration

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by b_baller1123, Jan 10, 2008.

  1. b_baller1123

    b_baller1123 Well-Known Member

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    Not really, I was actually pretty bored. But anyway, here it is, not very good, but whatever.

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    Comment me.
     
  2. [.BC.] David

    [.BC.] David 吉祥物

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    Is some kind of motion blur going on? IDK where
    the focal could be really b/c its not clear
    I also like the fx, but it could use more.
    the black isn't doing the entire job for me.
    Lighting and text is good, keep it up. read some tut's.
     
  3. Marthmaster92

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    don't really care for the blur to be honest.

    Can I get that stock though? Looks nice.
     
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    i think the blur should be taken off
    the hand should be part of the focal
     
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    The bottom left cloud kind of looks out of place, the Fx look great, and like just about everyone else has said, the blur is just a bit too heavy.
     
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    I agree. Take off or lower blur


    and hand shuld be part of focal.

    besides that its nice
     
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    One with color is slightly better.

    Good job overall. Nice effects.
     
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    i hink u v bkured that way to much, maybe tone it down a lil,also some sharpning sorry i dont knw what else to say but the sig does need work...some more colours and adj layers would surly help.
     
  9. b_baller1123

    b_baller1123 Well-Known Member

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    You guys are right, it's way too blurred. I was trying to make it seem as though the hands were moving, but it looks like I overdid. Thanks for the comments though guys.

    @Marthmaster92: No problem man, I'll send it to you in a PM.
     
  10. Chris*

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    The blur destroys the focal >.<.

    It's a nice idea though.
     

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