Digital Drawing Need C&c

Heroes At War.

This is a school work where I have to do something based on Piaccso so I decided I'm going to get his picture Massacre In Korea and make it something like Massacre in Fullujah. The whole is pretty much fully drawn in photoshop.

original





Version 1





Version 2





Final

 

I don't really get it.... sorry.

The style is faithful to the original though, so......... brownie points.

 

its suppose to show the the massacre in fallujah. Where innocent civilians died.

 

I always knew Superman was a dick.

also, is that Robin in the crowd? lol

 

I adore the first one, I don't like the second one it feels photo-shoppy. First one is cool though.

 

any criticism? does it carry the feel of Picasso's work?

 

i added a new version.

 

Lol, yeah it looks like Robin, I wonder why he is always behind Batman.

The first one looks appealing and you should work on making it look a little more sensible.

 

how could i make it more sensible?

 

Thanks to everyone who commented on the picture. Especially Horny .