Diamond Nightclub

We have to start a business in our economics class, I'm doing a club. That's my cover page, any comments greatly appreciated

 

very nice indeed!! looks like you will do VERY well with it....nice piece!!

 

thanx ^_^ I might post some ads later that we had to do.

 

I think the text is positioned too close together.

Otherwise it looks really well done =D

 

Thanx I changed it and put the text further apart and sharpened the eye area a bit.

 

Nice adds, I like the first one.

 

Awesome, sir.

You can see some nipplage outline on the second one though.

I prefer R&B to RNB (acronyms, lol. I know, nitpicky), myself, but what you have is perfectly acceptable.

 

Haha lol I hope my teacher accepts the half naked girl. Thanx for comments guys

 

He might take it into the bathroom with him.

If he takes awhile, you're good.