Defy Gravity & Grow 'em By The Truckload

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by duckieking, Sep 4, 2008.

  1. duckieking

    duckieking Well-Known Member

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    As I've been giving some criticism around here the last days, and most of it isn't really positive, I thought I'd give you guys an opportunity to take me down :D

    SO, please CnC these two tags ...

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    The original title was "Time to defy gravity" but I couldn't fit it into the tag decently :P
    couldn't find a decent bird render, so I just used a brush :blush:
    Also, it seems to look a lot more crisp viewn on a white background...


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    I'm having a little problem placing the text creatively, so some help there would be nice :)



    (and please, no criticism on my current tag ^^ It's the second one I've ever made and I know it's ----)
     
  2. duckieking

    duckieking Well-Known Member

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    bumpity, hoping this gets noticed by someone willing to cnc :S
     
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    Mkay.

    1/ The stars/planets on the sig don't work, the stars are clearly small white blobs with a glow + the glow on the planet is far too harsh edge wise, needs fading out a bit. Text isn't bad, although the opaqued text doesn't work and overall as a sig it doesn't really work either, No sense of depth, looks like a giant bird flying from earth as opposed to a bird flying from earth.

    2/ Far better then the first, colour wise and depth wise, however the text doesn't really fit in this one, and overall it's a bit boring.

    "ok"
     
  4. duckieking

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    thanks : ) I'll try to keep it in mind
     
  5. -Sя.WolfganG

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    oo im in love with the birdy piece.. try bringing it out more..
    play with the color balance and photo filters perhaps.. ;)
     
  6. Transluc3nt

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    1st: The glow on the stars doesn't work. Doesn't really look like stars, you need more random, a lot more random. The colors need to be blended better, between the reds and the blues.

    2nd: It's not bad. Colors are fine. But the background seems very empty.

    As far as text goes, your placement could be better. There's the Rule of Thirds. Here's an example. Try to keep the text where the lines crisscross. This is just a general rule of thumb. Once you become more experienced you can incorporate the text into the signature, and placement could be anywhere.

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  7. duckieking

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    Thanks A Lot Transluc3nt! Exactly what I needed for the text :)
     

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