Didn't realize the sotw was closed but oh well. I think it came out pretty solid overall and tips or insight is appreciated thanks for taking time to look.
yah its a bit messy the only way i can tell its dead space is cuz you said it was =x looks alright though
the render doesnt stand out at all. seems as if its part of the background to make a abstract c4d sig or something practice makes perfect though. keep it up