focal point doesnt really stand out much and it's a little flat. i give it a 5/10 sorry bro needs a lot of work...
It's really flat, and needs more depth. The background draws away from the focal point. Also, Work on the border a bit. It dosen't really seem to match the rest of the tag.
If you could make the render "pop out" more it would add a lot. Also maybe try adding some blur too add focus to the render.
