Dante Sig

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  1. Daecu

    Daecu Senior Member

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    well, im branching out, i think its for the best XD

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    c&c ^^

    edit: v2 [​IMG]

    edit: v3 [​IMG]
     
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    I like it.... But I'm having trouble verbalizing what it is I dislike about it. Maybe the word I'm looking for is it seems kinda hazy? Does that sound correct?
     
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    It's foggy. That's what you're trying to say I think haha.

    I would make it less foggy, more saturated. I like the effects though.
     
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    mmk i see what u mean, maybe saturate/add more contrast to the middle most area (render) ?
     
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    really felt i could go with this one so i edited it a bit, heres v2

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    Daecu Senior Member

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    pushed this down really far by my own posting >.< bump (sorry if thats kidna annoying)
     
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    I like v2 personally, but I ain't no ---. Haha. I think the coloring really gives it life though.
     
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    cool, ill keep it in mind for the next ones then ^^
     
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    Foggy was the word I was searching for lol.

    I still say it's a bit to FOGGY around the actual render, but it does indeed look great. Nice work ;)
     
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    Very nice depth and effects. I think the text would look better if you moved it closer to the focal imo.
     
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    Yes foggy, I could not quite work out what I meant till I scrolled down either :D

    It is nice though.
     
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    It like it, V1 is better though
     
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    Here's what I'd do.
    I would burn on a low opacity
    all of the render's shadows on his
    face. Just until it looked "good". ;)

    Give it a wirl. ^_^

    The rest of the tag look pretty good. ;)
     
  14. Daecu

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    well i re-assessed the sig and decided that there was one smudge layer that was causing all the foggy issues, i lowered the opac on that and i think the render rly came out, heres v3 (also putting on top)

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    v3 = win
     

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