Daft Punk

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by BlizZ, Feb 16, 2008.

  1. Feb 16, 2008 at 8:44 AM #1
    BlizZ

    BlizZ Senior Member

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    rate please
    I tried something else ^^
     
  2. Feb 16, 2008 at 10:22 AM #2
    GKgfx

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    too sharp here, the blue line is also too distracting
     
  3. Feb 16, 2008 at 10:54 AM #3
    Mortified Penguin

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    When I think sex, I think this tag.
     
  4. Feb 16, 2008 at 11:05 AM #4
    Chris*

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    I agree to that, but it's still hawt.
     
  5. Feb 16, 2008 at 11:38 AM #5
    Xioushi

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    When I have sex, I dream of this tag.
     
  6. Feb 16, 2008 at 7:27 PM #6
    diverseartist

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    needs color balance
    i like the chaotic style tho
     
  7. Feb 17, 2008 at 6:00 AM #7
    BlizZ

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    thanks guys, I tried to fix some problems in these

    v2:
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    v3:
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    any better?
    comments please
     
  8. Feb 17, 2008 at 7:07 AM #8
    Ravr

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    hmm i think you will need to change the focal, as it is now the brown thingie at the left
     
  9. Feb 17, 2008 at 7:13 AM #9
    W_O_L_F__Y

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    The silver guy looks out of place sorta, he could be a little more blended.
     
  10. Feb 17, 2008 at 7:37 AM #10
    Zohair

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    Looking more like a comic but nice work
     
  11. Feb 17, 2008 at 7:41 AM #11
    BlizZ

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    comic? why that
    but thanks for the new comments, I might make a v4 changing the focal ravr
     
  12. Feb 17, 2008 at 1:29 PM #12
    zombies

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    The red colors are killing it. Just work on the colors overall. Composition of the focal is too far to the right.
    Lower contrast, and make it less bright.
     
  13. Feb 17, 2008 at 1:32 PM #13
    Hadouken

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    The blue line is too distracting imo, the tag itself is a little oversharpened.
     
  14. Feb 17, 2008 at 4:38 PM #14
    pianoman0723

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    its cool, but that red patch on the left really steals the attention away from the real focal (the two guys).
     

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