[d]ownhearted

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Dreamery, Mar 18, 2008.

  1. Dreamery

    Dreamery Well-Known Member

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    v3:
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    Haven't made a new tag for quite some time?

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    + not too chaotic
    + lighting
    + defaults 100%, 7.0

    Comments appreciated. ^_^

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  2. ikky

    ikky Senior Member

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    I like where you where headed with this but i dont think it turned out that great. More because the cube effects are too harsh.
     
  3. SNudge

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    Maybe if part of his shoulder showed it'd look better. He currently suffers from a bad case of FHS(Fleating head syndrom :>)
    Also, the contrast right>left is way to big. It's hella bright. :)
     
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    clean some of the efx from the face of render..
    right side looks plain
    sigs got potntial ...needs more work tho
     
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    saturation is off imo
    not feelin the composition
     
  6. Dreamery

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    Okay, thank you all for your feedback.

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    Had some time to make a 2nd version:
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    Not exactly satisfied with this currently, but I don't have the time to continue with adjusting.
    Appreciate the comments. ^_^
     
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    Yeah the compo is off. Too much stuff on the right compared to the left.
     
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    Love the text. Which font did you use?
     
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    crop the tag to solve your neg space problem. ^^
     
  10. Dreamery

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    Thank you for the comments, and let's just say that it is a default font. :)

    V3 made just because...
     
  11. JL Beowolf

    JL Beowolf Well-Known Member

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    nice job it looks awesome, just dont like the squares.
     
  12. TheKoolestBe

    TheKoolestBe Well-Known Member

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    I like it....I'd like it more if the right side wasn't so strong...the hash marks on his face kind of corrupt the whole thing....Other than that...great use of text....
     
  13. Dreamery

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    :) Thank you both for commenting.
     
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    I just dont like the square effects on the face...nice concept and obviously done with skillz tho!!
     
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    Thank you. ^_^
     

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