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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Hoplite_A2, Oct 1, 2007.

  1. Hoplite_A2

    Hoplite_A2 Well-Known Member

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    Here's meh latest, I like it. :D -

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    What do you guys think? ^_^
     
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    Hoplite_A2 Well-Known Member

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    :bump: ^_^
     
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    the lighting is too strongly done, and the malak text sticks out a bit too imo but i like the bg
     
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    Looks pretty cool mate :). Your style is interesting and different from most peoples.

    Hmmmm text could use a little work. Doesn't seem to blend in very well.
     
  5. Hoplite_A2

    Hoplite_A2 Well-Known Member

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    Yeah, text was a beast. :|
    Thanks for the comments guys! ^_^

    I'll try to fix the lighting, thx.

    Anyone else?
     
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    Try to fix the lighting + text.

    Also, that laser-like red/white beam looks a bit strong and out of flow.
     
  7. Hoplite_A2

    Hoplite_A2 Well-Known Member

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    Oh,
    Thanks. :D
    That's his lightsaber. lol
    I'll try erasing it.
     
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    not to bad tone down light just a tad..
     
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    It has nice flow, and decent depth. The only issues I can see is the very forced lighting, and the text. I can help you with text.

    Remove the stroke from around the text, and lower the "Dark Like" text so it's only a few pixels above the other. Also, make it full caps, and use the character spacing in your character window to stretch it out to the same thickness as the main text. Other than that, good work. ;D
     
  10. Hoplite_A2

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    Thanks, just updated, I'll go work on the text. ;)
    Appreciate the help man.
     
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    The lighting doesn't seem very natural, and it's so bright it leaves room for any more detail. the sig is so contrasted Darth Malak's lightsaber just looks like a white block with a stroke.

    Sorry man, not feeling this. :/
     
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    Thanks,
    Appreciate the comment. ;)
     
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    V3 is great. Good job.
     
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    Thanks Inverse. ^_^
    Appreciate all the help guys! :D
     
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    V3 is definitely nice, good depth the effects are great, the text is decent as well. Nice Work!
     

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