The first thing that stands out to me is that the render is very low quality. It seems to me that you either enlarged a render, or were using a low quality render in the first place. Second, is that it just seems like a combination of different filters and C4Ds etc, that don't really work together in any way to create a scene or a style. Still it's good to see LPs from people who are relatively new to photoshop, so keep it up. Too many people simply get caught up on signatures.
thanks for the comments the render was actually alot bigger and was GQ i think i lost some of the quality in using some layer styles but i understand what you mean http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=16DuaVo21XU made vid of the making if anybody is interested
