it's nice but the thing on the far right is really distracting me from the focal point. nice lighting though. black and white is the best.
Yeah, I agree with flowzart. The thing on the right is drawing me away from the focal. I like the lighting and color. I like the colored version better.
Like the other people said, thing on the side is distracting. Try adding some detail around it, then maybe blurring around the edges too add depth to the render.