Creed - Sixteen

<div align="center">Actually used a render in this!
Anyway tried some new stuff, but stayed with defaults.
CnC please!!


Sixteen, Oh holy day
Your time has come and passed
The rapture we’ve been waiting for
Has come to us at last
Sixteen for every fake
Sixteen to every whore
Wipe that dirt from off your face
Sixteen is at your door

Oh, voiceless, wasted
You soaked your heart in gasoline
Now light it up and burn
Sixteen - Demon Hunter
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definatively color version. it flows really good.
a little sharp, but i see thats the effect you were going for.
great job!

 

I don't like how the render is one color, but the background is another. Also, the background seems oversharpened just a tiny bit. Nice one though.

 

it has a nice flow just seems to sharpened

 

Looking good, just seems a little heavy on the eyes (there's like so much detail).

 

It's nice. It would be better if that pattern thing was just like pen tool.

 

Thanks, it is a tad sharp, but thats because i wanted the details of the effects to show.

It would be sick if i could do that in pen tool, but i can't, lol.

 

Some nice effects and flow in it, but I think the sharpened effects are a little too heavy on the eyes. Other than that, nicely done.

 

Thanks.

 

I really like the feel of the colored one.

 

Thanks, my coloring normally sucks.

 

Crazy to open one of your threads and see a render...

 

Lol, people were getting bored of me using shapes as the focal.

 

I used a square one time just because I didn't want to use a circle like you do.

 

Lol, i should copyright the circle.