render gets lost in it all, maybe the point, but not really working, looks like its just pasted on top the background
i dont get this one. no flow there. its like u pasted a background in and pasted a sprite render on top of it. thats what it looks like to me and in the black and white one the render doesnt look visible at all. sorry. not a fan of this. maybe read a few tutorials. you'll get the hang of it. dont think of this as a negative feedback, think of this as positive, you can use it for your next sig.
