Crap I Suckkk At Writing

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  1. Sep 6, 2008 at 5:28 PM #1
    diverseartist

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    quick edit here delte
     
  2. Sep 6, 2008 at 5:35 PM #2
    pianoman0723

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    It's not bad. I mean, the meaning is clear. But it's just dead boring.
     
  3. Sep 6, 2008 at 5:51 PM #3
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    I didn't read it, but it looks like writing so you get 6/10 for effort.
     
  4. Sep 7, 2008 at 7:07 AM #4
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  5. Sep 7, 2008 at 12:20 PM #5
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    Dude... too long! D:
     
  6. Sep 7, 2008 at 7:39 PM #6
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    i would say dumb it down way more or use diff. words that doesn't gives off the "I'm a very sophisticated dude and I'm a genius" type thing.

    overall it's understandable and ok read for me.
     
  7. Sep 7, 2008 at 7:43 PM #7
    13d Keane

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    It's better if you prevent using the same words again and again.
    Plus, it's just overall better if you use words like that. He's making an essay, not chatting via AIM.
     

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