1.) only thing I see to fix is try to find somthing fit in the blank white spot, or just keep it blank as you have it if you can't find anything that fits fluently with the signature because it doesn't really look bad i just thought i'd add that suggestion, **** BUT MAINLY **** try a different text for underneath the MGS4 text 2.)Way to bright and it looks like you didn't really do much your self to this image add some more effects to make it look like you did more maybe?