Commercial Layout

i got a question to make a layout ,where he could sell templates of, but show tuts at the same time this is what i got so far

 

The template is VERY busy, try making it a bit cleaner.

And what the heck do you mean with that sentence that you wrote?

 

well i like it this way there is alot going on indeed but not confusing, and what i wrote was, a member on my forum asked if u could make a template, where he can show the templates and tuts on 1 page,thats what i ment

 

I like this one man..

GJ, very professional looking IMO.

 

That looks bad...

1. Way to messy
2. Get rid of the pixel fonts
3. Make the overall look calmer with more empty space

 

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And the template looks really good, it might be a bit messy, but its still really good. Maybe you should remove the pixel fonts and add some other color to get some contrast. GJ!

 

wow i love it. just >.> eh looks a bit too grungey and too blued

 

This is nothing compared to the quality of your other template which makes me slightly supsicious. Anyway, it's very monotone, try add some contrast. I don't like the fonts or the navigation, it needs alot of work still.

 

nice concept but needs alot of work

 

too busy, buttons to bevellish, teerible render... but could be a very nice gaming template if you change it a bit...

 

it's not bad kinda messy but i guess it works might turn some people away who just want hosting tho cause of the mess on the front page. people want it easy to find what they came for and with so much stuff on the front page it could make that hard to do. keep working on it. ur other template was way better tho :-/

 

little bit 2 dark for me but nice job man keep it up

 

Its aight, but the render is horribly cut i mean it really choppy if you ask me.

Buttons look quite deep like mentioned before and its really busy and chaotic.

But however i like the oclour scheme and if you worked on it man i think you could be in for a nice tmep

 

Overall it is good when you look at it, but if you take time there are things that just don't look right. Take out the server in the left corner, your not selling web space and they look awkward there. Also, some of the text is to dark and then you have fairly bright white text which really really stands out and annoys the eyes.

Also the banner and the bars at the top need some work.

 

i love it pro but yet some clutterd i do liek it and there is place where u can sell em carnt remeber something liek myfreeaceauction or somthing

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and one more thing if i was a ripper i would find taht extremly easy to rip and i meen very very easy to rip theres no anti rip or txt on it