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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Shadow, Sep 5, 2009.

  1. Shadow

    Shadow his name... was Boner!

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    C & C please. Thanks!
     
  2. Shadow

    Shadow his name... was Boner!

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    bump! O_O
     
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    DutchBlood Well-Known Member

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    I think its really nice. The render is blend in nicely, but its plain with only one color
     
  4. Slasher

    Slasher Tekken Lord

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    Yeah, I was going to say the same thing about the color. The tag itself is nice, but the monotone kinda kills it.
     
  5. mjsmile

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    It's too monotone. I like the blending, but the text doesn't fit with the sig imo.

    Good job though :)
     
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    tt speedy1 Senior Member

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    It would look much better with more colors.
     
  7. Tarun

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    Font. A font which seems seriously, and literally beautiful.... maybe something cursive or such. Rest is great, and I'd like to see the stock/render/both.
     
  8. Shadow

    Shadow his name... was Boner!

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    Thanks for the comments. Kind of hard to change the color on this considering the colors on the render don't go with anything else. The render I used is from the Undead Knights video game, the character is Sylvia. She's on the cover of the game. http://imgkk.com/i/0Azj_-.jpg

    Without Gradient Map and other effects
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    I really like the second one, it looks much better without the Gradient Map, awesome tag :)
     
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    i think the second one looks a lot better too. The light source in the top right seems slightly out of place. maybe move it just a little bit to the left. also, the text could use just a little bit of work. other than that, that's a really good lookin gfx!
     
  11. Tarun

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    Damn thats seriously sexy. Muahh !
    Just do something to the font. Pweez
     
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    I like everything except the horizontal lines in the top right.
     
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    Second one is much better, Someone already said it but you gotta do something with the font maybe try a new position too :)
     
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    Its bland, and monotone.... try bringing out the eyes and center of the face with colour and lighting tweeks.... try and really make thoes features your focus point and have them popping at the moment i find the text to be drawing my eye away from the render.
     

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