Even though I'm not too into grunge style tags personally, I like this one because it fits the whole war feeling. I think th render could have been a little more blended though.
Way oversharp, both the text and render are unblended, colours are dull and it's far overbright. Texture is boring and compo is boring. I'm not even gonna mention depth. I'd recommend you go do some tutorials, as you need to develop your techniques.
