Well, the render is overcontrasted, way too overcontrasted. There's a c4d in the background by his shoulder, that ruins the flow alot. And the lighting is off, the lighting should be in front of his face, as you can see by the render/stock, not under him. Work on those things, and your signatures will become alot better
I don't think like evolution. The BG is nice and the light look pretty good, just one thing : the text i don't like it.
thnx phil i am gonna have to disagree with u evolution because i am really digging the outcome, cause i got the outcome to be exactly as i wanted it to be..so i think i will just ignore your comment anyone else?