College Assignment

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  1. Wynter

    Wynter Senior Member

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    Hey guys. Had to design a poster related to my college and with a get involved message. Need some constructive criticism please as there is a chance it could be selected to be displayed all around my college. :D

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    The main building is my college's main block, and the tower in the clouds is a defining monument within my town's community, hence why i decided to add it in there. Also the signs and banner at the bottom cannot be removed and need to stay in the poster..

    C&C please :)
     
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    Love the ray colors.
     
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    i love it. it's awesome, loving the effects and the ray colours like MP said. and the board signs are a nice idea, it should be #1 in your college :P
     
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    Wynter Senior Member

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    Thanks for the comments guys :)
     
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    yeah you're right and i don't like the rest of it
     
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    I like everything but the signs. They look like they were dipped in water and then hung up.

    But overall its amazing :D
     
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    the photos have to be higher def i feel, the colors in the objecys feel quite flat compared to the high quality of the space BG, rays, planet, etc.
     
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    I like the rainbow colors coming out at the top.
     

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