Collab With Starbit

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by DarthSomething, Mar 22, 2008.

  1. DarthSomething

    DarthSomething Well-Known Member

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    w/ text[​IMG]

    no text[​IMG]

    notext2[​IMG]

    Comments and critiques? ^_^
     
  2. starbit

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    btw, i think text ruins it..
     
  3. DarthSomething

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    Okey dokey then. Taking out the text.
     
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    I agree, text kills it, scratch it <3
    edit: Much better el <3
     
  5. DarthSomething

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    Scratched. Iz gud noa? :P
     
  6. starbit

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    so..
    cnc?
     
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    Without text it is much nicer,
    nice usage of c4ds. I like it.

    For me the c4ds seem a bit "too" sharp, try to blur em a bit or sharpen the render.
     
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    Little blurry for my taste. Also, on the bottom a little to the left of the render, the c4d is coming out in a different direction and doesn't look that great.

    Other then that, GJ.
     
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    V1 is the best,seems like theres a lot of empty space though.Still nice sig.
     
  10. DarthSomething

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    Okey dokey. Nother added. Better?
     
  11. JL Rubidox

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    Textless version is much better. Nice flow and effects. :)
     
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    Nice bg, good flow and c4d usage.

    i like the last version the best.
     
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    render is blended to good with the background, otherwise its the bomb!
     
  14. starbit

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    its a stock + smudge =)
     
  15. ikky

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    No txt v1.

    Really empty on this.
     

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