Alright, this is another one of you. This looks better than the one I saw above, you have a nice focal. The font is for me personally a little too big but it is okay. Let us see what you can do better about it. There is not really a good depth because your background looks a bit boring, the flow is nice but I am not the friend of those strange lines. Be sure if you do a flow like this one it is always the same, the light from the corners have a different one which makes it look a bit strange, try to smudge it maybe in the same direction as the flow of the black outlines. Try to make this one black white it might looks better. ^.^
