I think the text needs a bit of work but I like how you gave it depthe and made her look like she is actually hanging on
It's good but not great. And you might not agree with me here, but here's what I think. 1) Text doesn't fit all with the sig. Sure, the colors are right, but instead of working with the sig, it looks like a distraction 2) The background looks like it's underwater, but then you have her hanging on to a rock, so it's a little confusing 3) The render itself has the underwater light marks on her, so that's a little strange 4) The focus is distorted because she's completely clear with the rock, and the background is completely blurry, so there's no understandable gradient (unless you wanted the background to seem VERY far, which fails too because you give no details of how far down it is.) 5) Light source is on the bottom left, which makes the bright spot on the bottom right kinda strange.
thanks man, i'll take those into consideration onto my new sig. but one question, how you suppose i make text "work with" the sig instead of distracting...
