I don't know what that means it bleeped out the word before color. But maybe add a background. Take a look at this tutorial, they have some cool Pokemon ones =D Pokemon Tutorial
She's saying ----- Idk if it's going to censor it for me too so I'll try a few different things --- Champ Master Boss Yeah :]
I do not really like it. It is just random stuff placed at random place to look cool. The text is a little strange as well. Sorry to say that.
You have at least to get some flow in there, the arrows are really pointing at every possible direction. ^^