imo it has a nice flow and i like the cartoon look to it. it's not the best but me, being a beginner, i have no idea where to say to work on.
I'll give you the first C&C i've gave in months. Typography is place right but looks horrid. Flow around the render is nicely done but doesn't extend ruining it. Depth is perfect tbh. Colours are nice although i'd like to see some more thrown in there. Composition is pretty nice too. 5/10