You need to work on your background, all it is, is a blue background, it isn't really worth 10-15 credits at this moment, the text isn't too bad althouh it could be a lot better, the cutting of the render's could be better too..
tf i wont pay for it at all man its very bad the renders... who the hell are they and the bg is horrid your using the standard controls for photoshop try adding effects and such