Let us see again. This time you added a light source which is pretty good placed, it could be some stronger. You could, for example use the dodge and burn tool at the last step. You go to image -> apply image and then you use your dodge and burn tool to make the focal point higher and the other point a little darker. It is a nice effect so that the light comes out more. :> The contrast at this signature is nice, too. One of the problem here are the colors. They look pretty monotone. The whole signature has this sepia-red touch. There could be some more variety. The flow is okay but the signature has no depth. It still looks like a foreground / background signature. I made something for you. Pmed you the thing. where you just made your background first and then your foreground without any connection to each other. You could for example try to use stock pictures at your background so that you do not have to create the depth yourself. Then you could put some c4ds or something to get the flow. If you make a signature like that, you only have to concentrate on the lighting because it might appear that the background has another lighting than the foreground. :> Let us move on the the text. :> It is pretty simple which I like, so that it does not draws away all the attention from the render. But at this one it is still too big a little. Lemme look. There are two ways, either you make it really unnoticeable or you make it dominant. :>
