Discussion in 'Signatures' started by ColdTurkey, Sep 22, 2009.
Nice lighting/depth, the text is pretty plain and I'm not really impressed by the bg, but a good job nonetheless.
that text is just off
OK, what can i do to make it better?
I have never been good at text.
Um the type right just looks... Weird I don't know what I'm getting at brush effects maybe?
hey bro, it looks alright, but i think the bg is a little bit too busy, and for your text, change the way its going because its basically opposing your flow, and thats also what the bg is kind of doing.lighting is pretty good thouhg
The render and background do not blend. Work on the text, make it stick out and don't slant it.
horrible. <--- sorry. im just being honest.
it looks like a sea of C4D's with bad choice of colors and text. the one thing u did do right though is the lighting source
Your background is.. really busy, and the color scheme doesn't really go with the render. The light source and depth are both on spot though. Blend the render better with the BG. The text is too plain, I would probably just remove it all together.
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