It's O.K Don't like the background. Don't like the circle splatters. Maybe try making it a black and white tag and messing with the levels.
Seems a bit small. I think you could have done more with the background. Add some lighting to really show off the C4D. Text is kind of meh.
It's alright. Flow is off, color is off. Text is meh. Just not feeling this one. Try maybe adding some depth to the background and a gradient map to deal with color issues.