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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by daedlus, May 1, 2008.

  1. May 1, 2008 at 11:03 AM #1
    daedlus

    daedlus Well-Known Member

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    cn c welcome :D
     
  2. May 1, 2008 at 11:32 AM #2
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    imo it's too bright and chaotic
    the depth seems really strange and the strong lighting enhances that
    text is distracting me though...
     
  3. May 1, 2008 at 12:29 PM #3
    daedlus

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    yea..hes concentrating on the inner energy in midst of chaos...
    thx for commenting
     
  4. May 1, 2008 at 12:34 PM #4
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    too much c4d and bright stuff

    i would work on it, maybe redo the background and the text
     
  5. May 1, 2008 at 1:01 PM #5
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    the idea of that is nice, but to me it looks like he's being drowned in his surroundings
    if you want him to stand out of the chaos change your lighting a bit, right now it's supressing your render
    make the light come from him, making it look like he is pushing away the chaos, not the other way around
     

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