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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by .atwa, Dec 19, 2008.

  1. .atwa

    .atwa Well-Known Member

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    Sup ppl

    I have no idea what inspired me to this tag...text is kinda meh, aswell as the bg. Depth was kinda hard for me too add...

    I would really appreciate some constructive criticism on how to improve...

    FIXED(final version now >.>):
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    better now? :tongue:
     
  2. briankooij

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    omfg looks hot
     
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    Remove the Text and those title cherry hanging out
    Overall KIU
     
  4. .atwa

    .atwa Well-Known Member

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    KIU? :huh:

    Thanks for the comments, keep them comming...;)

    Will update with a new version soon...
     
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    remove the cherries on the outside. change the text. dont like the black and white really.
    but
    it looks really good besides that. honestly those are little things. the overall tag is great.
     
  6. .atwa

    .atwa Well-Known Member

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    edidet with fixed version ;)
     
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    i like it more now. very nice. i like the text now. A++
     
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    fresshh tagg
     
  9. Proximity-HazeD

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    Don't understand the point of your lightsource but i really like the style
     
  10. .atwa

    .atwa Well-Known Member

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    lol me neither but without it, it seemed to me like something was missing. I see now that the light source is kinda random...will try to fix it =).

    Thanks for the comments...any more c&c?
     
  11. CokeClassic

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    love your smudge. I think the comp is weird, though. meaning, I don't like the way the mouth is on the left and another focal is on the right, it throws it off to me. not much you can do about that except removing the mouth altogether which might make it look strange.
     
  12. .atwa

    .atwa Well-Known Member

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    Hmm i see what you mean. Thanks for the nice words about my smudging, actually some pretty uncomplicated settings ;).
    Yey can't really fix the 2 focal-stuff. It would look even more weird, nothing i can do about it really ;), though i will try to fix it...burn tool maybe!!?.
    Thanks for the comment...
     

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