<div align="center">well i put this together really quick like 15 mins at the most. tell me wat u think C&C this one has a color balance change to it and i moved some layers </div>
The render's really choppy on the hair, + the positioning is weird. The tag's unnecessarily huge and has no focal point since there's no varying light. Prefer...V2 I think, though I think the text needs to be scrapped. Remove the border, crop the top away from the tag as it's really serving no purpose. Splatter effects are a bit weird too, the ones on the left are very contrasted while the others a bit plain. It's not a bad start for this type of thing but needs work.