Ok my first real stock sig.Yes, i know i asked Skoll to do the same thing.I wanted to do it myself.Then i wanna see what way he tales it. As usual C&C please!(BMTH is short for bring me the horizon,which is a awesome band) Oh,and it has a black boarder.You just can't see it well.
Undistinct focal, unnatural lighting, bad blending and the several focal's aren't even clear. Try sticking with one render/ focal, sharpen that render/ focal, use the dodge tool to enhance the light that already exists, don't use such strong color adjustments. In any case BMTH is a sick band, keep it up, for a first it's good.