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Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Jmanahan, Mar 9, 2008.

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  1. Mar 9, 2008 at 10:13 AM #1
    Jmanahan

    Jmanahan Well-Known Member

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    Well i tried a new text style this time please comment on me
     
  2. Mar 9, 2008 at 11:45 AM #2
    Hatton92

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    The lines below the text aren't in 'line' ( :P ) with the text above.
    The text ' Blood ' seems to be taking the focal point away from spiddy :( Which isn't good as we all love spiderman.
     
  3. Mar 9, 2008 at 12:10 PM #3
    JWJ

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    Great job! I especially like how you blended the render with the background.

    I'm not sure if black and white really goes with this sig. IMO It needs more color to make it more vibrant.

    The text could be better if you took away the lines.

    Good work though buddy!
     
  4. Mar 9, 2008 at 12:30 PM #4
    Xolt102

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    I love it.

    Spiderman is always the win-win.
     
  5. Mar 9, 2008 at 12:53 PM #5
    .infinite

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    Nice tag, you got some good skills for beginner here.
     
  6. Mar 9, 2008 at 7:40 PM #6
    AlexIsUb3r

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    love it, feel is really awesome, nice work on focal as well.
     
  7. Mar 9, 2008 at 9:52 PM #7
    jkcimafranca

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    Great sig dude, way better than what i could make!
     
  8. Mar 9, 2008 at 10:01 PM #8
    Daecu

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    looks great but the lines under the text are kinda distracting, don't want the text to be taking away from all the work you did on the other areas ;)
     
  9. Mar 9, 2008 at 10:10 PM #9
    ikky

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    Kill the text.

    And maybe the line C4D .... then you will have a winner.
     
  10. Mar 11, 2008 at 8:30 AM #10
    diverseartist

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    im feelin it bro
    add more of a focal about it
    9/10
     
  11. Mar 11, 2008 at 8:32 AM #11
    steez

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    Add more of a focal, and take the red text away, its distracting.
    Nice job. :]
     
  12. Mar 12, 2008 at 10:06 AM #12
    Jmanahan

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    TY
     
  13. Mar 13, 2008 at 8:54 PM #13
    Jmanahan

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    Bumps
     
  14. Mar 23, 2008 at 3:21 PM #14
    Jmanahan

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    .................,d
     
  15. Mar 23, 2008 at 3:21 PM #15
    Jmanahan

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    .................,d
     
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