Blocnote Cover

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  1. kovan

    kovan Senior Member

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    So this is a small assignment for school, a simple design for a blocnote and/or sketchbook.

    I tried to keep it simple but appealing, I used a picture i took myself on the background and off course photoshopped the rest of it. I did the text in InDesign.

    But i'm not sure about the blue of the text?
    Hope to get some CnC from you guys :)

    (original version is bigger, this is an smaller preview version)
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    SM Ascillor Senior Member

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    cool text, myself I'm not feeling the blue, at least the dark blue. I would try making it either all the blue of amateur, or keep it beige/cream/brown colors.
     
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    I made a version with other color text, i like it much more to be honest!
     
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    wayyyyy better now, nice job.
     
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    Version 2 is much better very nice and simple..
     
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    I like the second version too. For the sake of variation ... have you tried aligning the text to the right? It would look more unconventional if you're going that way. :)
     
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    No that actually didn't cross my mind at all, Decided to make a version 3 with text aligned to the right. But i don't know, version 2 still looks the best to me

    Thanks for the input!
     

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