Bleach - First Try (plz Comment)

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by star99, Oct 31, 2007.

  1. star99

    star99 Well-Known Member

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    Ok im not so good i havent done this befor, so i want you guys to be as mean as posible as i would like to see what an where i can improve on plz thks in advance...

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    i dont believe in being mean.
    ill try help you out tthough, the resolution of the design is way to big for a sig, the width of it classes it as large art.
    try not to fit all of the render on it, or put it in a corner, fill most of the tag with the render, if i used that render, i would of used the head and upper torso.
    some of the effects you have used show potential, and the background looks pretty cool.
    from what i gather this is your first sig, so if it is, it is very good for a first, some first piece sigs I have seen are terrible.
    you have great potential, follow some tutorials in the graphic tutorials section. start with begginer tutorials, and you should come along quite nicely.
    well done.
     
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    Ya i was look on the tutorials, there are just so many to read :P but im started readin some. and thk you for ur comments ill take them in an work on it, also wat size are sigs ment to be cuz i find it on diffrent sites they say diffrent, if u could tell me in cm it would be easr for me :P

    also another thing is what are some good brushes to get as there are so many....

    but once again thk you for ur comment.
     
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    I dont think they should be over 400x160 or so, but maybe thats just me
     
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    That is a good try for a first bud, as I recall mine was horrid! :D Great render choice as well, Bleach ftw! As most of the people on here said, check out some tuts and go from there. If you are new to photoshop as well I recommend the tutorial page on here in the graphics section that is called "Everything you could want to know about photoshop," or something like that. ;) Keep up the good work and welcome to the family! :D

    Oh and "my" standard size is 420 x 120. Just thin enough and wide enough. :)
     
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    Looks good for a first timer, you'll get way better in no time.
     
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    Great job on your first, I remember mine being crap.

    Check out the tutorial section here on GR, trust me, its worth the read ;P
     
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    erm okay thats massive,amyeb try a smaller size and make the backgorund a bit different maybe and create some kinda flow and the text colour and text font chnge that.
     
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    like everyone else said , make it smaller. look at the sig sizes on everyone else's posts. those should be the sizes. i use around 380x125
     
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    Ok thank you guys for that.... an i will do as all u guys say. once again thank you...

    but brushes :s there are so many wat are the ones i should get first to start me off?

    btw i cant w8t to makin sigs like the rest of u guys :P
     
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    i think its way too big ... but for a begginer it's an alright sig ... dont work practice makes perfect
     
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    i think its way too big ... but for a begginer it's an alright sig ... dont work practice makes perfect
     
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    Your sigs bad and you should feel bad! lol, I'm just joshin' you. There isn't much I can say that hasn't been said already.

    Bleach is awesome and keep up the good work.
     
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    ya i know i wasnt too sure on the size i think i have the size sort now... this is a new one i just made testin out the size real... tell me what u think plz thks..

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    i know this one needs more work but i just want too see if im headinin the right dirrection...
     
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    As JayB said to practice here is another one...

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