Black Star

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by GuarD1anZ, May 28, 2009.

  1. GuarD1anZ

    GuarD1anZ Well-Known Member

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    v1[​IMG] v2[​IMG]


    my first vertical
    do something simple about it
    well anyway,C&C =)
     
  2. GuarD1anZ

    GuarD1anZ Well-Known Member

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    BUMP!!!!
    anybody????
     
  3. soflaz

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    I like the colour better. The background could use a little work and I don't love the text, but it isnt terrible. Keep it up
     
  4. GuarD1anZ

    GuarD1anZ Well-Known Member

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    alright thanks for the comment =)
    anymore????
     
  5. KaMaS

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    Text kills it IMO..
     
  6. Greasy Pete

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    the color one is sweet, a little boring though
     
  7. GuarD1anZ

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    thanks everyone.....
    anymore comments????
     
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    effects are too chaotic for me, needs some contrast and depth
     
  9. i4n1k8

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    B&W is better, the various elements don't seem to match very well, also the text ruins it imo. And lastly it seem a little low quality :huh: as if it was saved as a jpg on medium. Maybe it's the render =/

    65/100
     

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