Beyond Pink Sig

Discussion in 'Signatures' started by Bigyeon, Sep 30, 2009.

  1. Bigyeon

    Bigyeon Well-Known Member

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    I don't really like the yellow space in the version 1 so i cropped it but idk it still doesnt look good so please tell me which one works best for you

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    I really liked the render (made by Anything Pink)
     
  2. Bigyeon

    Bigyeon Well-Known Member

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    bump
     
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    Crazy 88 Senior Member

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    I don't like the negative space all the way to the right of the piece, other than that I like it. The effects are good, and the render is blended well, nice placement too. Text flows well.
     
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    Jiin Well-Known Member

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    i would say v1. the others look odd to have the blank space on the right. and i would remove the border
     
  5. claytron

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    I would think it lacks in a few certain aspects, very good start on the signature though.

    My thoughts;

    * Replace the C4D or add a bit more depth // blend // effect to the area

    * The signature has a "flat" feel to it. No real focus point.

    * Overall color scheme is great! Needs more vibrance in contrast // deeper color. Try using a color balance a few times.

    Good work though! :)
     
  6. chipmunk2k5

    chipmunk2k5 Well-Known Member

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    Take off the border, use the blur and sharpen tool to create depth, and maybe add some lighting..
    I am gonna disagree with claytron bout the color I dont like the pale yellow and pale purple but thats just me
    but do remove the border

    EDIT: forgot to say, its not that bad just a few edits to it :)
     
  7. ViktorViolent

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    What font is that, its awesome. I would say bring the C4D on the left a little closer to the render and just work on making that work right. I don't like the space between the two. I don't mind the empty space on the right part of the sig though, that's okay imo.
     
  8. Bigyeon

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    Thanks for the comments i will remove the border i actually did blur and sharpen but i agree the blurring is insufficient, for the lighting i used the density tools and a black/white gradient but ye maybe not enough so ill work the lighting :D for the space between the render and the c4d the problem is that i tried to move it but it cut off too much of the render off imo as for the font its cyclo here is the link link ill post a v4 after all the changes
     

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