I don't really like the yellow space in the version 1 so i cropped it but idk it still doesnt look good so please tell me which one works best for you I really liked the render (made by Anything Pink)
I don't like the negative space all the way to the right of the piece, other than that I like it. The effects are good, and the render is blended well, nice placement too. Text flows well.
i would say v1. the others look odd to have the blank space on the right. and i would remove the border
I would think it lacks in a few certain aspects, very good start on the signature though. My thoughts; * Replace the C4D or add a bit more depth // blend // effect to the area * The signature has a "flat" feel to it. No real focus point. * Overall color scheme is great! Needs more vibrance in contrast // deeper color. Try using a color balance a few times. Good work though!
Take off the border, use the blur and sharpen tool to create depth, and maybe add some lighting.. I am gonna disagree with claytron bout the color I dont like the pale yellow and pale purple but thats just me but do remove the border EDIT: forgot to say, its not that bad just a few edits to it
What font is that, its awesome. I would say bring the C4D on the left a little closer to the render and just work on making that work right. I don't like the space between the two. I don't mind the empty space on the right part of the sig though, that's okay imo.
Thanks for the comments i will remove the border i actually did blur and sharpen but i agree the blurring is insufficient, for the lighting i used the density tools and a black/white gradient but ye maybe not enough so ill work the lighting for the space between the render and the c4d the problem is that i tried to move it but it cut off too much of the render off imo as for the font its cyclo here is the link link ill post a v4 after all the changes
