i like the background, was it a stock or did you do it yourself? the renders look slapped on top, no blending and the colouring doesnt work im afraid. Not much lighting wise and the Text pulls you away from the focal point. Have a look at the tut section and read through a few. Other than that if you did the background youself im impressed i like it and i would use it. Good for total beginner work, don't worry i remember mine and those blasted mine out of the water, i cringe the way i used to think they were quite cool. Stay active about here and you will learn fast.
