Beautiful

C&C Please

 

You need to match the colors. Blueish green and white don't mix at all.

 

agree with karter sorta. it does bring your eyes to the focal. but its very ....lacking.

 

work on text.
placement and style of it.

if u are gonna put text it u will want it to "flow" with ur render/stock
if u put it far away ur eyes will go towards the text and it will ruin the focal of the sig.

so usually the best place for some text is near the focal
now dont put it directly on it, just a lil aways of it so it doesnt ruin the sight of the focal.

just keep practicing

 

Colors need to match. Text isn't that good.

Try out black and white.

 

That's pretty much what I was going to say. You've got to make the render and the background match or else the sig doesn't work very well.

Keep working on it.

 

Jessica Alba is hot. Unfortunately, this tag is not.

 

Agreed

 

thanks for the C&C will try and use it on my next signature =)