The really bright right side ruins it a little and yeah i think it would also look god sharpened a little
not bad 1st the text is okay but i think there could be better placement and it would look lot better.2nd maybe try sharpning bstman it may look better and try adding sum gradident maps or sumthing coz its a lil bright..Other then that not bad.
Well I took some of the suggestions you guys gave me and this is what I have right now.... It doesn't look super different, but better I think.